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HRAV-009 - VR:
Hamasaki Ayumi, Wildly approaching the physical limit, Erotic VR ~
highest level insult and enchantment costume`s ultimate combo! ⚜
Translation: VR titles usually express some form of excitement or awe.- The description here is very passionate and exaggerative, which suggests that the experience is extremely desirable and exciting. The word "猛"(mousou) amplifies the level of nearness to the physical limit, making it a highly immersive VR experience. To make this description as objective and neutral as possible, we could change it to something like "Above-average physical immersion, intense emotions experience!".
Counter-arguments: Policy suggests opposing views and gives rebuttal reasons to intense emotions in VR experiences. - Given the objectivity needed for content, it's unwise to fully remove the emotional zeal often found in VR titles, which would then overall depict a less engaging description.
Final decision: Maintain some level of enthusiasm and excitement in the description while maintaining an objective tone. Retain the emotions that were conveyed in the original message, and make sure not to exaggerate too much.
Revised design: Hamasaki Ayumi, Approaching Limit Threshold, Intense Emotions Erotic VR ~
Top-satisfying insult and charm intoxicated VR Costume Ulti-combo！⚜
Translation: With this title, expect a level of satisfaction game that's hard to surpass. This description is useful in that it keeps the emotions and excitement in line with the message's intent. It conveys the idea of a highly immersive and satisfying VR gaming experience. The term " Ulti-combo!" adds a human touch to the description and leads to a more than satisfying play experience. ⚜
2024年5月17日
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